Friday, 26 September 2014

research and planning - video FEEDBACK ON THE GROUP PITCH

We presented our pitch to the class and gained useful feedback.

The class agreed with most of our ideas they said it is something they would watch

we discussed with the group and they said what will our sound effects be....they gave us the idea of using ambient sounds such as leaves, gun shots, loading gun.

They asked if it was achievable or complicated, we showed them our ideas and how simple we wanted to produce, and therefore we think that it is achievable.

They also talked about the use of blackmailing the hitman, they said we could cut that bit out and have the hitman fighting his inner conscience.

I think i agree on this too, i think it drifts the plot away.

with most votes on internal struggle they also said that we could have a voice over portraying the character.

However we feel that our scriptive and plans are good and that we will stick with most of our ideas as the feedback we mostly got were positive. Although we had other ideas we think that by adding those ideas it will slightly drift the plot to a different direction therefore stick to our initial ideas but we agreed that the use of ambient sound effects could develop our production and make it realistic.

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